Deborah Barchi
Oct 31, 2023

The way you tell this story is my favorite type of narrative: an older person recollecting about a formative experience from their youth. The reader gets the benefit of both innocence and acquired wisdom , both the result of the same event. I really enjoyed this story, although to be honest, I think doing the Steiner mental exercises would have driven me up a wall!

Deborah Barchi
Deborah Barchi

Written by Deborah Barchi

Deborah Barchi has recently retired from her career as a librarian and now has time to read, explore nature, and write poetry and essays.

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